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Dec 30, 2015 10:01:16 GMT |
Post by nishiki on Dec 30, 2015 10:01:16 GMT
| Karl
male - black mamba snake - noble of the corpse troupe
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APPEARANCE He's short compared to other black mambas, which is a whopping five feet long. He's darker than the average mamba too, having dark scales that make him look almost completely black and just hints of a pale underbelly and a speckled white snout. In a sharp contrast to his dark coloration he has lime green horns and wings. The horns look like little lumps coming from behind his eyes. The wings are tiny, and can only get him a few inches of the ground: although, its awkward to see a snake try to fly, isn't it? PERSONALITY Cynical little bugger, he is. Being neglected by humans your whole life will do that to you. He's not very social to other animals, not even to the lords and ladies, seeing in his past life the most he's talked to were mice. And to be fair, mice don't hold fair conversation either. But aside from that, he can be very clever and intellectual and calm minded when he wants to be. He also has a habit of slurring his words (perhaps because he is a snake?) HISTORY Karl was raised in captivity by scientists for most of his life. He was mostly used by being milked from his venomous glands to make medicine. He was treated without much love and care, and because of that, he loathed living his entire life. Fortunately for Karl he died because of his poor treatment. After the eschaton Karl roamed on his own for a while, gambling for money. Eventually, he made enough money to blend among the rich and with that, the higher ups of the Corpse Troupe. MISCELLANEOUS He once bit a human and never regretted it,
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Dec 31, 2015 19:19:03 GMT |
Post by mansprout on Dec 31, 2015 19:19:03 GMT
Your character has been denied. To improve this character, you should go into further detail in the history section - what you have written is good, but you have not addressed his history between the Eschaton and the present day. Secondly, you need to apply for his position in the Corpse Troupe - this can be done here using the position application. After you have made these changes, please tag me in a response so that I can re-evaluate it!
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Post by nishiki on Jan 2, 2016 9:31:13 GMT
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Post by mansprout on Jan 2, 2016 16:16:00 GMT
Your character has been accepted! If you have not done so already, please make a tracker and a plotter. Otherwise, you are free to begin roleplaying!
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